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The purpose of this book is for your child to fill it with thoughts, ideas, observations, and things he or she wonders about, hopes for, or wants to know more about.  They are a “diary” of sorts.  Stories do not appear out of nowhere.  They need a place to start.  The writer’s notebook is that place.  It is a place to preserve ideas so they will be available for future conversation and writing.  Students may even include sketches, diagrams, or other visual representations.  Your child will be required to write in them every night for 10 minutes or so.  Full length stories should not be place in here, just thoughts and ideas.  A full page, two maximum, is more than adequate.  These books will NOT be graded, but will be checked several times a week for completion.  The only thing that would affect their grade is if the “Writer’s Notebook/Journal” is not being completed.  Please make sure they are writing in these each and every night.  If your child wants to keep their journal “private” that is normal and please try to respect their wants.  Just glance at it and make sure it is completed.  Of course, if they want your help (you can give simple prompts) or want to share the content with you, please feel free to join in.  Just please make sure that the work is their own.  The important thing is that they are thinking, not the actual content itself.  We want to try and get the children to use their imaginations and creativity as much as possible.

        If you have any questions about these, please feel free to ask…

Please make sure your child writes in their journal/notebook each night for atleast 10 minutes in a quiet place so that they can think. Thanks....

 

1 What is a writer's notebook

A writer's notebook is a notebook that you write many things in. One of the things you write in the book is colorful words and use of language that you hear or read somewhere such as a book. You also write story titles that you think would make a good story line. You may think of a good story title or poem to write down in your writer's notebook when your doing something that has nothing to do with writing.  You may write a story using a title that you wrote down in your writer's notebook years ago.

  A writer's notebook gives you a place to live like a writer , not just in school but wherever you are , wherever you get the inspiration.  If you dream of becoming a famous writer someday , or if you just enjoy writing down interesting things that you see , hear , or think about , a writers notebook is for you.  It's a place to record dreams , feelings , thoughts , and all your observations about the world around you.  Some of these entries might be the basis of a story,  poem , or personal essay.  2 Different types of paragraphs

Here we have some definitions of different types of paragrahs:

Persuasive

Expositoy

Narrative

Descriptive

First we will discuss a definition of a Persuasive paragraph.   A persuasive paragraph gives the writer's opinion on the topic and tries to get the reader to agree with it . When you write a persuasive paragraph , you should give facts and examples to back up your opinion. Otherwise you won't persuade or convince your reader that your opinion is the right one.

The main purpose of an expository paragraph is to give information about a topic.  It may explain ideas, give directions, or show how to do something. An expository paragraph uses transition words (such as first , second, and most importantly in the model below). These words help guide the reader through the explanation.

In a narrative paragraph, you tell a story by sharing the details of an experience come alive.

A descriptive paragraph describes a person , place , thing , or an idea. When you write a descriptive paragraph, you should use words that help your readers see , hear , smell, taste , and feel what you are describing. You should tell your readers what colors things are how big things are , what things sound like , ect. Your readers should feel as if they are right there with you.

3 Writing a good story

When you write a story make sure you include a setting , plot , atmosphere , character traits and goals.  Try not to introduce all the characters at once one point in the story.  Make sure you explain  the  characters with colorful language, such as intelligent , ambitious , contientous , etc., instead of words such as nice , smart , kind , yuckie , ect.

Before you write your story think about what type of story it's going to be such as, gothic (scary), mystery , and comedy. Your story should always have a conclusion at the end of your story. You should have mature vocabulary in your story. This means that you should expand your resources in explaining what words mean.  Also, use proper punctuation. Punctuation is what you end your sentences in, such as . ? ! . Put a ? when the sentence asks something , put a period when the sentence is stating , declaring , or demanding something. Use an ! when the sentence is saying something exciting or shocking. Most importantly use colorful language.

In your story you should try to use similes.  A simile is a figure of speech that uses the words "as" or "like." Figures of speech are used like adjectives or adverbs.  They modify or describe a person , place , thing , or action word with a colorful and often visual term or phrase.  Creative writers and poets make good use of these.  For example:

as soft as old leather

as musical as a flute

sparkled like diamonds.

In your story you should also include metaphors.  Metaphors are figures of speech that compare two things but do not use the words "like" and "as."  These colorful phrases are used like adverbs or adjectives to describe people , places , things , or actions.  You must learn not to take them literally but to enjoy their use.  For example:

at night my bedroom is a real icebox or her heart is a fountain of kindness

Like we said before you need to use colorful language if you want to make your story interesting and keep your reader occupied.  For example:

1.August is motionless and hot

2.With blank white dawns and glaring moons

3. At night there is lightning but it quivers all alone

4. A great potato of a women

5. The sky was a ragged blaze of red and pink and orange, and its double trembled on the surface of ond like color spilled from a paintbox.

6. Outside, in the ring of trees around the pond, the birds were celebrating, giving the new day a brass band's worth of greeting.

Marking Punctuation

The period

1. A period is used to end a sentence. It is also used after initials, after abbreviations, and as a decimal point.

At the End of a Sentence

A period is used a the end of sentences making statements or requests.

After an Initial

Place a period after an initial in a person’s name.

As a Decimal

Use a period as a decimal point and to separate dollars and cents.

After Abbreviations

A period is placed after each part of an abbreviation.

After Final Abbreviations

Only one period should be used at the end of the sentence when an abbreviation is the last word.

Ellipsis

An Ellipsis (three periods) may be used to show omitted words or sentences or to indicate a pause in dialogue. Tip: When typing an ellipsis, leave one space before, after, and between each period.

To Show Omitted Words

8. An ellipsis is used to sow that one or more words have been left out of a quotation.

Shortened Quote: "All I know is that I saw something that hummed and glowed…hovering above the water tower."

At the End of a Sentence

If the words left out are at the end of a sentence, use a period followed b three dots.

Pause in Dialogue

An ellipsis is used to indicate a pause in dialogue. For example: "That’s … incredible!"

Comma

Commas are used to keep words and ideas from running together, making your writing easier to read. Commas tell the reader where to pause.

Items in a series

Commas are used between words phrases, or clauses in a series.

In Dates and Addresses

Commas are used to separate items in addresses and dates.

Tip: Do not use a comma to separate the state from the ZIP code.

To Keep Numbers Clear

Commas are used in numbers of four digits or more to keep the numbers clear.

To Set Off Interruptions

Commas are used to set off a word, phrase, or clause that interrupts the main thought of a sentence.

Between Two Independent Clauses

16. A comma may be used between two independent clauses which are joined by coordinating conjunctions such as the following: and, but, or, nor, for, so, and yet.

Tip: Do not connect two independent clauses with a comma unless you also use a conjunction.

To Set Off Dialogue

Commas are used to set off the exact words of the seaker from the rest of the sentence.

In Direct Address

Commas are used to separate a noun of diredt adddress (the person being spoken to) from the rest of the sentence.

In Letter Writing

Commas are used after the salutation, or greeting, in a friendly letter and after the closing in all letters.

Semicolon

The semicolon is a cross between a period and a comma. It is sometimes used in place of a period; other times, it serves the same function as a comma.

Colon

A colon is used in a sentence to introduce a list or draw attentionn to information that follows. Colons are also used between the numbers in time.

To Introduce a List

22. A colon is used to introduce a list.

After a Salutation

A colon may be used after the salutation of a business letter.

Hyphen

A hyphen is used to divide or join words. Hyphens are also used to create new words.

To Create New Words

A hyphen is used to form new words beginning with the prefixes self, ex, great, all, and half. A hyphen is also used with suffixes such as free and elect. For example: great-aunt, half-baked, all-purpose, self-esteem, president-elect.

Dash

A dash may be used to show a change in thought or direction in a sentence, or to show that a speaker has been interrupted.

Apostrophe

An apostrophe is used to form plurals, to show that a letter or etters have been left out of a word, or to show possession.

In Singular Possessives

The possessive form of singular nouns is usually made by adding an apostrophe and s. My sister’s hobby is jazz dancing.

When a singular noun ends with an s or z sound, the possessive may be formed by adding just an apostrophe. Lucas’ hobby is collecting pencil stubs.

In Plural Possessives

29. The possessive form of plural nouns ending in s us usually made by adding just an apostrophe. The girls’ log-rolling team.

For plural nouns not ending in s, an apostrophe and s must be added. Children’s book

Quotation Marks

Quotation marks are used to enclose the exact words of the speaker, to show that words are used in a special way, and to punctuate titles.

To Punctuate Titles

Quotation marks are used to punctuate titles of songs, poems, short stories, essays, chapters of books, and articles found in magazines, newspapers, or encyclopedias.

Question Mark

A question mark is used after a direct question (an interrogative sentence) and to show doubt about the correctness of something.

Exclamation Point

An exclamation point is used to express strong feeling. It may be placed after a word, a phrase, or a sentence.

Italics

Italic is a printer’s term for a slightly slanted style of type. Italics are used to indicate titles and special words.

Tip: In handwritten material each word or letter which should be in italics is underlined.

Parentheses

Parentheses are used around words included in a sentence to ad information or to help make an idea clearer.

Capitalization

Capitalize the following:

Proper Nouns, Proper Adjectives, Names of People, Words used as Names, Titles Used with Names, Historical Events, Abbreviations, Organizations.

 

Writing Friendly Letters

 Parts of a friendly letter

The Heading includes your address and the date. Write it in the upper right-hand corner.

The Salutation or greeting usually begins with the word Dear and is followed by the name of the person who will receive the letter. Lace a comma after the name. Write a salutation at the left-hand margin, two lines below the heading.

The body of the letter contains your thoughts and ideas. Begin writing on the second line after the salutation. Keep the paragraphs short for easy reading.

Write the closing two lines below the body of your letter. Capitalize only the first word and follow it with a commas. Put your signature under the closing.

Writing Tall Tales

Planning your story

Choose a Hero or Heroine

Create a Powerful Foe

Show the Cleverness of Your Hero

 

Writing Your Story

Tall tales are meant to be fun and entertaining. So remember to include a lot of exaggeration and humor in your writing. If you use dialogue, have the main character say things that are funny or clever, and have other characters say things that sound a little silly or simple.

Think of yourself as an old-time storyteller with a group of eager listeners around you. Your job is to tell them a good story.

Publishing Your Writing

The Final Step

Publishing is a very important part of the writing process. It makes all of your planning, drafting, and revising worth the effort.
And it also gets other people to listen to your ideas.

Publishing can take many forms. Reading a finished story to your classmates is a form of publishing - so is selecting a poem for your classroom portfolio. If your classmates and teacher really like your writing, you might want to explore some of the following ways to publish it.

Mail It

Greeting cards

Letters to public figures

Requests for information

Thank-you letters to field-trip guides, bus drivers, etc.

Letters that complain about or praise a product or service

Letters to pen pals in other schools, cultures, or countries

Notes to parents about school activities

Perform it!

Plays for school and community audiences

Puppet shows

Radio shows over the school public address system

Talking books for the visually impaired

Taped interviews for a class project

New words for familiar music

Presentations at PTA or school board meetings

Introductions of guests at assemblies

Videotaped documentaries for local TV stations

Print It!

All-school or classroom collections

Stories just for veterinarian clinics doctors’ offices, or other waiting rooms

Manuals on how to do certain things

School-survival guides for younger students

Programs for school productions

Newspaper reports of class trips or projects

School handbook updates

Kid’s-eye view brochures for local travel agency of chamber of commerce

Submit It!

There are many magazines published every month that feature student writing. Write to one that you think might ublish your work Ask your teacher for help. Also ask your teacher or librarian for a list of contests you can send your writing to.

Write, Write, Write !!!!